Nyora Yenyaya
Verenga script yako nenzwi guru. Zviri nyore here kunzwisisa nokunzwa kamwe chete nguva chete? Kusiyana nekudhindwa, vateereri veTV vanopfurwa kuti vawane nyaya yacho.
Ndosaka mazwi anonzwika zvakafanana asi ane zvinoreva zvakasiyana-siyana anogumbura zvinyorwa. Mashoko akadai sekuti "cite", "nzvimbo," uye "kuona" inofanira kudziviswa kana zvichibvira. Muchidimbu, zvirevo zve punchy zviri nyore kuti nzeve inye kudarika nguva refu, mitsara yakaoma yakazadza zvikamu zviduku.
Dzivisa Passive Voice
Kunyora izwi kusinganzwisisiki kunokonzera chimiro chechirevo chechirevo chechirevo, chiito, chinhu chiri mumashoko anoshanda achinyora. Izvi zvinonzwika sechidzidzo kubva kuchikoro cheChirungu, asi zvinonyatsosiyanisa zvakanyanya mukuparadzira mashoko ekunyora.
Izwi rinoshingaira mutauro nderokuti, "Gororo rakapisa pfuti." Iwe unoona nyaya, chiito, uye chinhu. Chirevo chisingaiti ndeichi, "Pfuti yakadzingwa nembavha." Chinhu nechiito zvakasvika pamberi pehurukuro. Vatariri vanofanira kumirira kusvika pakuguma kwemutsara kuziva kuti ndiani akaita.
Zvadaro uropi hwavo hunofanirwa kugadzirisa ruzivo irworwo pavanenge vachiedza kuchengeta izvo zvinonzi nhau yepamusoro.
Chenjererai "ne" mumutsara. Izvozvo zvinowanzotora mutemo uyu wakanyorwa mumusingazwi.
Shandisa Nhasi Tense Iyo Yakakodzera
Nhau dzeTV dzakagadzirirwa kuratidza se "ikozvino." Ichi ndicho chimwe chikamu chakakura pakati pekuparadzira nekudhinda nyaya yekunyora.
A6: 00 masikati manheru inhau inofanirwa kunzwika mutsva sekunge iyo nyaya iri kubuda ikozvino.
Asi musangano wenhau we meya iwe waiitika wakaitika zvakaitika pa2: 00. Chimiro chechisikigo ndechekunyora, "Mutevedzeri weMeya akaita hurukuro yemashoko mberi nhasi."
Nokushandura chinangwa chemutsara kune nyaya yenyaya hurukuro, iwe unogona kuisa mutsetse muchiitiko chezvino uye ugozvipa imwe nguva. "Meya anoti anoda kutema mitero ne20 muzana.Akaita chiziviso pamusangano wehau ..."
Muenzaniso iwoyo unotanga munguva yemazuva ano kune hokore , uye inochinja kune nguva yapfuura. Zvakakosha kuti usangomanikidzira nguva iripo mumutsara wose unonyora. Izvozvo zvinganzwisisika zvisinganzwisisiki mumasikati masere masikati kutaurirwa kuti, "Anoita chiziviso pamusangano wehurukuro unoitika pa2: 00."
Nyora Nhau pamusoro pevanhu
Zvinoratidzika pachena, asi zviri nyore kubvumira script kuti irege kurega kutarisa kuvanhu vari kutarisa mashoko enyu ezvenhau. Kana vataridzi vanoona nhau dzenyu dzisingabatanidzi zvakananga kwavari, ivo vachamuka.
Saka apo hurumende yehurumende yekufambisa inoparidza hurongwa hwekuvandudza zvivako zvehupfumi hunosanganisira kushandura mabhiriji ari pedo neguta rako, unogona kuiswa nehuwandu hwemashoko. Asi shandure ichi kuva chimwe chinhu chaunoda uye chinoreva kuvanhu vari pamba.
"Kutya kwako kushanda kana kuchikoro nokukurumidza kuchachengeteka uye kuve nyore, nokuda kwechirongwa chikuru chekuita mabhiriji eguta redu zviri nani." Iwe wakatora ruzivo ndokuudza vatarisi kuti ingashandura sei hupenyu hwavo. Dissect press kits, mairafu, uye data usati watanga kunyora kuti uone kuti sei vatereri vako vachatarisira nezvazvo.
Chiito Vhesi Yedzera Verve
Mukunyora kwemashoko, haugone kuita zvakawanda pane zvinyorwa kana chimwe chinhu chemashoko ako, asi iwe unogona kunongedza zviito zvako. Icho chikamu chekutaura kunogona kuunza hupenyu kune nyaya dzako.
Tarisa nyaya kuti uone kana iwe unogona kushandura mutemo unoti "vagari varikumbira ruzivo ..." kune "vagari vatsva mhinduro." Kuchinja kuri nyore ikoko kunowedzera kukurumidza uye kuita.
Usati watorwa, rangarira nyaya yako inofanira kunge yakarurama. "Kuda" kunogona kunge kwakanyanya. Edza, "Vagari vese vanoda kuziva."
Kushandisa ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, iyo, yaiva," yakaderedza kushanda kwechiito. "Vagari vese vanoda mhinduro" inonzwika zviri nani kudarika "Vagari vari kutsvaga mhinduro."
Iva nehanya neNhamba
Numeri yakaoma kune nzeve dzevatereri, kunyanya kana pane zvakawanda zvavo. Ita pfungwa yako neenhamba kana maviri, zvino famba mberi.
Panzvimbo pekuti, "Kubhadhara kwekambani kwaiva $ 10,470,000, ndokubva wawira $ 5,695,469 pagore gare," iwe unogona kuita kuti mutsara uve, "Imari yekambani yaive inenge mamiriyoni gumi nehafu nehafu, ndokusvika kusvika hafu iyo inotevera gore." Muteereri anowana pfungwa yacho kunze kwekunge awane imwe nhamba yekupedzisira.
Zvakanaka kutora nhamba huru uye kuvashandura mune chimwe chinhu chinokosha kune vateereri. Kunze kwekutaura kuti kambani yemagetsi iri kusimudzira mitengo ne $ 3.5 mamiriyoni, tora nguva yokutaura kuti kukwira kwacho kunoreva kuti munhu wose anowiridzira achatora $ 200 mamwe gore. Iyoyo nhamba inobata vanhu zvikuru.
Enda Cliches uye Journalese
Kunyangwe nhau dzakawanda dzinonyora vanyori vanowira mumusungo wekunyorera mazwi akaneta akafanana nemashoko. Dutu rine simba rinogara richiita "kuparadza," vezvematongerwe enyika "vanokanda ngowani yavo muchende" uye nguva mushure mokunge mhosva yaitika "zvinyorwa zvinongororwa."
Aya mazwi asina chinhu anoita kuti nhau dzako dzinyorwe dzikaita sedzeve. Vatsiva nemashoko ayo vanhu vemazuva ose vangashandisa mukukurukurirana.
Vatori venhau vanowanzotora magwaro kana vachikanganiswa nemamwe mapeji uye vanongodzokorora zvavanonzwa. Imwe mapurisa angati munhu anenge apomerwa mhosva yepfuti "akatiza netsoka." Ndiyo basa revanyori veTV kuti vachinje icho "kutiza." Kuteerera kwemitemo, hurumende, uye hutano hwehutano hune nzira yavo yekutaura, iyo isingafaniri kudzokororwa pamhepo. Kana zvisina kudaro, kunyora kwemashoko kwako kunonzwika sekuti yakabva pakusunungurwa kwemashoko.
Nyora kuVhidhiyo
Nhau dzakawanda dzeTV dzine nhau dzinoverengwa sezvinoonekwa nevateereri vhidhiyo iri kuvhara. Gadzirai mashoko kumavhidhiyo sokunge iwe uri kutungamirira boka rekushanyira.
Izvozvo zvinoda iwe kuti uzive zvichazove pachiyero sezvo vatereri vanonzwa script. Kana uchinge uine ruzivo urwu, mamwe ose ari nyore.
Kana uri kutaura pamusoro pekufungidzirwa kwekunyengedzera apo vhidhiyo inoratidza kuti munhu anenge ari kukwira pasi mumugwagwa nemhosva yake, ati, "Anopomerwa, akaonekwa pano kuruboshwe achienda kumatare nemhosva yake." Iko kutaurwa kwevhidhiyo inoita kuti muoni wacho asashamisika kuti ndeupi wevanhu vaviri ndiye anokanganisa asi achishaya pane imwe nyaya yacho.
Mutsara wakafanana, "Tarisa zvinoitika apo vanodzimisa moto vanoedza kubvisa chikafu kunze kwemuti," vanoita kuti maziso avatarise 'vadzokere kuchikona. Yeuka, vamwe vanhu vane nyaya dzakashandurwa pavanenge vachiverenga pepanhau kana kudya kwemanheru. Ita kuti vateereri varove neterevhizheni.
Kutengesa Nhau
Kunyora vatapi venhau vangagomera pamusoro pechinhu chinokosha chekunyora nyaya dzeTV. Mumaguta akawanda, pane pepanhau imwe chete asi mafirimu akawanda epaTV anopa nhau. Izvozvo zvinoreva kuterevhizheni; munyori wenhau anofanirwawo kutengesa chigadzirwa sechimwe chinhu chakasiyana uye chakakwirira kumakwikwi.
"Apo bhokisi rekuchikoro rakati hapana mari yekombiyuta yekirasi, takasarudza kutsvaga mhinduro." Rwonzi rwakadaro runoratidza kuti boka remashoko rine utsinye, uye riri kutora matanho kusvika kuchokwadi.
"Isu tiri chete chivako chevhidhiyo chechirwere mukati mekudya kwekolishi." Siteshi reTV rinoshandisa zvinyorwa zvaro kurwisana nepfungwa yokuti zvese zvemashoko mumuguta zvakafanana.
Kunyange zvazvo iyi isiri yekushambadzira kwakachena, ichi chikamu chinokosha chekunyora kwemashoko iyo inowanzoonekwa pane zviteshi zvakawanda zveTV . Ziva kuti imwe nhepfenyuro yezvemitambo inovewo chirongwa cheterevhizheni isingorwisana chete nedzimwe nhepfenyuro asiwo zvose zviratidzo zveTV zviri mumhepo panguva imwechete. Kutengesa kugoverwa sechinhu chinokosha.
Tungamira Nyaya Pamberi
Nhau yeTV haina nyaya "kuguma" pasi pekanyorwa. Kuguma kweshoko rako kunowanzotaurira vateereri izvo zvichaitika kune vanhu vanobatanidzwa.
"Bhodhi yechikoro inotora vhoti kana kuti kuchera mubhadhadzi wevadzidzisi pamusangano wayo unotevera," regai vateereri vazive zviitiko zvinotarisira mberi. Kusiya chokwadi ichocho chinosiya mavateereri vachirembera.
"Tichava pamusangano uyu uye tizokuudza zvakaguma zvevhoti," zvakanaka kuti uwedzere kuitira kuti vataridzi vako vadzoke kuzovandudzwa. Rwonzi irworwo rinotsigira kuti boka rako remashoko richagara pamusoro pehau uye kwete kungoisiya.
Icho chinhu chakawanda chekuedza kuisa mu-script 30 seconds. Kunyangwe nhau dzeTV dzichiita seyese nezvevhidhiyo, kunyora kunonyorwa kwemashoko kuchakuisa iwe pamusoro pevamwe muimba yako yepaji uye ungave uri kiyi yekuvaka basa rako nekukurumidza kupfuura iwe waifunga.