Nhaurirano dzeChiratidzo chePfungwa
Enda mberi kwemutambo! Dzidza mitemo iyi, uye iwe uchadzivisa zvikanganiso zvakajeka:
- Shandisa komma pakati pekukurukurirana uye tag line (mazwi anoshandiswa kuzivisa mukurukuri: "akati / akati"):
"Ndinoda kuenda kumahombekombe kwevhiki rino," akamuudza sezvavakabuda mumba.
- Nguva uye nguva dzinoenda mukati memashoko ekudzokorora mumunyorwa weAmerica (Brits ine mitemo yakasiyana-siyana); zvimwe zvipupuriro - semicolons, mubvunzo wemibvunzo, dashes, uye nheyo dzinokurudzira - dzinoenda panze kunze kwekuti inotaura zvakananga nemashoko mukati memashoko akanyorwa, sezvinotevera mumuenzaniso wakabva pfupi pfupi yaRaymond Carver "Pandinochemera Kubva":
"Handidi mapoka ebenzi," anodaro mukomana anoenda kuEurope uye kuMiddle East. "Champagne iri kupi?" Anoti, uye anoseka.
Mumuenzaniso unotevera, mubvunzo wemubvunzo unoenda kunze kwemashoko ekudzokorora nokuti hausi chikamu chezvinhu zvakataurwa pamusoro apa:Akati, "Tinofanira kuenda kune mamwe mafirimu" here?
Uyewo cherechedza kuti mutsetse wacho unoguma neine chete chiratidzo chechiratidzo: mubvunzo wemibvunzo. Kazhinji, usashandise zvikamu zviviri zvechiratidzo, asi enda nemasimba ekuwedzera. (Mubvunzo uye zviratidzo zvinokurudzira zvakasimba kudarika nguva uye nguva. Funga nezvawo semutambo weDombo, Pepa, Mheso, kana zvichibatsira.)
- Apo mutsetse wekiti unopedzisa mutambo, unofanirwa kuregwa nemagetsi. Cherechedza kuti tsamba yekutanga yechikamu chechipiri chemutsara iri muzasi, semuenzaniso uyu kubva munyaya yaFlannery O'Connor "Greenleaf":
"Ndiko," Wesley akati, "iwe kana ini ini mukomana wake ..."
- Kuti uratidze rukudzo mukati memashoko ekushandisa, shandisa zvinyorwa zvisiri izvochete:
"Wakaverenga here" Makomo Akafanana Nyeredzi Nyeredzi "?" akamubvunza.
- Nokuda kwemukati mokurukurirana, maratidziro akafananidzwa akakodzera, ingove wakafanana.
Ndinonyatsomuda here? iye akafunga.
- Kana chirevo chichidarika pane imwe ndima, usashandise magumo ekupedzisira pakapera ndima yekutanga. Vashandise chete kana munhu atoita achitaura.
"... uye pakupedzisira ini handina kumuda.
Ndaifunga kumuroora, kunyange zvakadaro. "
Nyaya Dzakakurumbira Dialogue Mistakes
Nhaurirano dzisina kukodzera maitirwo ekunyora uye kuenzanisa zvakajairika pakati pevanyori vezvinyorwa. Chikanganiso chinonyanyozivikanwa ndezvokushandisa zvinyorwa kunze kweshoko rakataurwa. Yeuka: chete mazwi ayo munhu anoti anofanira kunge ari mukati memashoko ekududzirwa. Asi apa pane mamwe maviri akawanzana mazano ekupikisa maitiro kukanganisa.
Chiratidzo uye Kuparadzaniswa
Zvakashata:
"Zvirokwazvo akapenga"! akati.
Kururamisa:
"Zvirokwazvo akapenga!" akati.
Ona mutemo nhamba mbiri pamusoro apa.
Commas Between Two Sentences of Dialogue
Imwe nzira iyo vanhu vasinganyori kunyora kukurukurirana ndeyokuisa mutauro pakati pemitsara miviri pane nguva.
Zvakashata:
"Ndakaita pfungwa dzangu," akadaro, "Handifariri kuroora naye."
Kururamisa:
"Ndasimudza pfungwa dzangu," akadaro, achigunun'una. "Handidi kumuroora."
Kunyange zvazvo kutonga nhamba 1 pamusoro apa kunogona kukutungamirira kuti utende kuti muenzaniso wekutanga wakarurama, yeuka kuti mitsara miviri yakataurwa inenge iine mitsara miviri yakasiyana uye inoda nguva.
Dzimwe Mazano Pamusoro Pokushandisa Dialogue
- Kufarira mukunyorerana nhaurirano asi usina chokwadi kuti ungaita sei kuti iite mukati memashoko anotsvaga maitiro? Une dambudziko kuwedzera kukurukurirana kune imwe nzvimbo? Verenga Kunyora Dare muChirongwa .
- Zvikanganiso zveGraam haisi iyo chete nzira yako yekunyora inogona kutambura. Izvo zvakakosha kuita kuti hurukuro yako inzwisiseke. Verenga Nzira Yokunyora Nhaurirano Dhaurirano yezano pamusoro pekunyora kukurukurirana.
- Vanhu vanonyatsotaura sei muzvinyorwa? Verenga Sei Vanhu "Vanotaura" muNhoroondo? nekuda kwemashupiti uye maitiro ekufambisa evesdropping nekuita hurukuro yako yekutendeseka-inzwi muprose yako.
- Unoda kuitora kune imwe inotevera? Dzokororai urongwa hwekutsvaga kuronga kuti uve nechokwadi chekuti mune zvimwe zvikamu zvegiramende zvakavharwa zvakare.