Chengetedza Zvirevo Zvishoma
Kazhinji, chengetedza mitsara pfupi. Oakley Hall, muThe Art and Craft of Novel Writing , inopa mutemo, "Imwe pfungwa nenguva uye uchengetedze mitsetse." Vanhu vazhinji havatauri mumitauro yakanyatsogadzirwa, yakaoma. Semuenzaniso, mundima iyi kubva kuna Raymond Carver "Zvatinotaura Nezvatinotaura Nezvorudo," ona kuti zvishoma uye zvisinganzwisisi zvemashoko ndezvipi:
"Pandakabva, ainwa chepfu," akadaro Terri. Akarova maoko ake namaoko ake. "Vakamutora kuenda naye kuchipatara kuSanta Fe, ndiko kwatakagara ipapo, anenge makiromita gumi kunze kwekuti vakachengetedza hupenyu hwake asi mazino ake akapenga kubva mairi, ndinoreva kuti vakabuda kubva kumeno avo. kunze semafungu. "Mwari wangu," Terri akadaro.
Dzvora Dhauriro Dzechokwadi
Kunyora pasi mitemo yako kungasave kwakakwana, zvakadaro. Mikana ndeyekuti, pachava nezviitiko zvawakanyora iwe, kuti uende kune chikamu chinotevera che nyaya yacho. Cheka chero kukurukurirana kusingakoshi.
Kana iyo isingagadziri chimiro kana kutungamira chimiro chako, chigadzirise . MuBhuku raGuam Writers 'mazano ekunyora fikisa, Allison Amend anotsanangura izvi nenzira iyi: "Ichokwadi chekukurukurirana kwakanaka chinhu chekunyengera.Vanyori vezvinyengeri vane tarisiro yakakwirira yekukurukurirana pane hurukuro yehupenyu chaihwo.
Nhaurirano inofanirwa inofanira kuva nehuwandu hukuru, kuisa pfungwa, kukosha, kupfuura kukurukurirana. "
Kukurukurirana pamusoro penzira yakarurama yaunofanira kutora paunenge uchityaira, somuenzaniso, unofanana kana uchienda seizvi:
"Saka ndinofunga kuti tinofanira kutora Elm kusvika kuLincoln," Maria akati, iyo mepu yakapararira pamakumbo ake.
"Ndizvo chaizvoizvo nzira yakanakisisa here?" Mel akamubvunza. "Zvakadini kana tikarova magetsi?"
"Asi iSvondo. Tichafara."
Hapana kukanganisa uye hapana chinodikanwa chinoratidzwa pano, saka hapana chikonzero chekuisa chiitiko ichi, kunyange chiri chokwadi kune upenyu. Zvichida, vanhu ava vari munzira yavo kune chimwe chinhu chakakosha: sei usina kutsvaga-kutamira kune izvo zviitiko zvinokosha, uye uchisiye kunze kwezvinhu zvekuenda ikoko?
Kune rumwe rutivi, kana chiitiko chacho chakanga chichizarura chimwe chinhu pamusoro peukama hwaMel naMaria, chimwe chinhu chakakosha kune chigadziro, taizochichengeta:
"Sei tisisiri kutora Elm?" Maria akabvunza.
"Ndakabvunza zvaunofunga here?" Mel akati, kushandura nzira dzinokurumidza zvikuru. "Paunenge uchityaira, unogona kusarudza nzira asi ini ndinotyaira, saka ndichasarudza mwari * @ n nzira."
"Zvakanaka, zvakanaka," akadaro Maria. Nekugomera, akazosvika pamusoro kuti ashandure paredhiyo. "Kana iwe ukandibvumira kuti ndifambe, zvino zvichida ndaigona," akadaro pasi pekufema kwake.
Kuverenga Zvakare
Nokuda kwezvimwe, ona kuti Vanhu Vanotaura Sei muNhoroondo?
kwaunowana ruzivo rwekuti ungashandura sei mitsara yako kuitira kuti inzwire sehurukuro yechokwadi, shandisa mharidzo "zvakanaka", uye dzidza zvakawanda pamusoro penguva yekushandisa mutauro. Onawo Kunyora Dialogue mu Action Scenes . Nokushandisa kushandiswa kwegiramende paunonyora hurukuro, verenga Kuverenga Kwaungaita Dhigirii Zvakarurama .