Clichés
Mashoko akadai "akadzikama musati mhepo," "Amai Nature," kana kuti "iye panga," yakashandiswa kakawanda zvokuti ikozvino yava kunzi clichés. Kunze kwekuti ivo vakakosha kunzwi rebasa renyu, kazhinji zviri nani kudzivisa clichés. Kana iwe usingakwanisi kuuya nemumwe mutauro wepakutanga, kazhinji kazhinji zviri nani kutungamira chirevo uye sarudza tsanangudzo yakananga.
Mixed Metaphors
Imwe dambudziko rinowanzoitika pamusoro pezvifananidzi ndiyo tsika yekuvhenganisa kana kuvashandisa, kazhinji kubva pakufunga kusina hanya kana pakufunga. Chigumisiro chinounza mifananidzo miviri isinganzwisisi pamwe chete. Muchi "Mienzaniso yeMateikhori", ini ndinopa muenzaniso "Kodhi yedu inodzidzisa ziso rako kuti ritambe nenzeve." Pano, mukurukuri akavhenganisa zvifananidzo zviviri, zvichiita kuti tisave nehupenzi. "Ziso refungwa" haigone kutamba chero chinhu, uye zvirokwazvo kwete "nenzeve."
MuMitemo yeVanyori , Diana Hacker anopa muenzaniso, "Kuyambuka Utah's salt inotora mu Corvette yake itsva, baba vangu vaifamba pasi pese musoro wakazara wemhepo." Anotsanangura kuti "ndege" inofananidzira ndege iyo "musoro wakazara wemhepo" inoratidza chitima.
Chimwe chiduku uye shanduro duku zvinoguma mutongo wakanyatsojeka, unogutsa: "Kuyambuka huta yaUtah's inotora mu Corvette yake itsva, baba vangu vakafambisa jet."
Bhuku rinonzi English Made Simple rinopa muenzaniso wakanyanyisa. Cherechedza zvaunoita iwe uchiedza kuverenga ndima iyi:
Nguva yeatomu yakashandura munhu, asi kushanduka chitarisiko kwakave kubva pakunamata kusvika pakunyama, kunyatsosiyana kwezano revaporofita vekare. Nhasi, munhu anopfuurira mberi mukufambisa kwake kwepfungwa, asi mweya wake unokwidzwa mugomba risina chigadziko chekushuva kwenhema. Pakaparadzanisa atomu, munhu akaparadzanisa hupenyu hwake uye akarasikirwa kubatana kwemazana ake ose.
Zvakaoma kupfuura, handizvo here? Sezvinotaurwa nevanyori:
Munyori anotanga nemufananidzo unofadza - kushanduka-shanduka - asi nguva pfupi pashure payo unorasikirwa nemunhu asingabatanidzi nezvekufamba kwepfungwa . Uyezve, anowana mifananidzo yake yakavhiringidzika paanowana mweya wakanyungirwa mugomba risina chigadziko . Pakupedzisira, anodzokera kuatomu, asi chimiro chepakutanga chekushanduka chitarisiko chave chakanyangarika zvachose, uye muverengi anobvumira mumvura yakadzika yemakemikari yose .
Cherechedza kuti zviri nyore zvakadini kuisa pfungwa pakusarudzwa uku:
Izera reatomu rakamisa hupenyu hwemunhu. Akangwara, akapfuurira mberi, asi zvinangwa zvake uye maitiro ake zvakamira. Kana hutsika hwevanhu huchigadzikana, kuparadzaniswa kweatomu kunogona kuratidza kusanyengera.
Kana iwe uine mubvunzo pamusoro pekuti iwe kana usati wabvisa chirevo, zviri nani kuti uite zvachose. Unoshandiswa zvisina kufanira, iwe unomuka uchiona benzi uye uchivhiringidza muverengi wako. Yeuka, chinangwa chako chikuru ndechekutaurirana. Dzimwe nguva izvi zvinoreva kuisa pasi pegove yako mukufarira kutaura pachena.
Tora nyaya ino mberi nemabasa ekugadzira mifananidzo yako kana kuedza zivo yako nemibvunzo.